This my first attempt to write poetry as an Adult. Words came to me like never before. I welcome your feed back. I am nervous, feedback is generous.
I haven’t written another poem since. Maybe a memory of childhood poetry or Adult desire.
Xx M
Soft music fills the room
Relaxing smell of exotic flowers
My body is enjoying the aroma
Slipping orchid in my hair
Candles reflect our body’s
Brushing your body against mine
The heat rises inside
Strong hands softly explore
I shutter as you pull my hair back, kissing my neck
Biting my lip softly eager to explore
I have something in mind for you
Anticipating you exploring my body
He carries me to bed, whispering my surprise tonight
Deeply kissing my heart beats faster
Unleash the Wolfe, I’m yours
Wrap your body around me,
Kissing, clawing, becoming one.
Squeezing me close, scratching drawing blood.
Heights of pleasure rise deep within
Kissing, laying in your arms
Xx M
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Firstly it’s the first time I saw your intro on me thanks M glad to be here…
Secondly poem was beautiful keep writing!
Love lis
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Thank you much fro the nice comments on the poem. I’ve changed addresses and people are still getting directed to old site. Hope to import process done this week. There are 405 post on the pervious site, I don’t want to loose the data. I need to learn how to back up my post.
Take care.
:)
M
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That’s my Twin!! :)
Very nice <3!!
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So glad you like, it started out x-rated, I took some lines and that’s what it cane to. I have never written anything like it in the past.I have received many positive feedbacks.
Just getting started, I’ve been sleeping almost all day and night. My body doesn’t like something in therapy.
Hugs
M
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Rest, Twin! You are healing! <3
I enjoyed your post very much, I'm glad you got many positive comments :)
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Hi Twin
I was vert nervioussince I’ve never written anything like that.
Throw Back Thursday is complete, I can work the other 24 drafts.
I sent you a personal email earlier.
Hugs
M
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Hi Twin!
Keep writing whatever goes to your mind :)
I’ve seen the email, I’ll reply to it soon!
hugs!
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I appreciated providing feedback. I have multiple options inactive bloggers. I’ve received feedback from Rob and Daniel. It’s January and we need to know our goals are regarding the Survivor site. One idea that crossed my mind is change the people who are not reblogging to quest writers. Then I can start search for a couple of active writers committed to the site.
:)
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That’s a good idea but don’t worry too much. You need your rest :)
hugs!
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:)
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Great! Evocative. You’re a natural, keep up the poetry :)
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Hello my friend
Thank you for reading and leaving a kind message. I hope the words come again.
Hope you’re having a great day, even a good day is good.
:)
M
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A different side of you, M., and it is as lovely as the others. Well done. 💖
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Hi Van
I was so nervous about posting. I appreciate your kind words.
Your encouragement brings me sunshine.
:)
M
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Reblogged this on Looking for the Light Blog.
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Great piece
Very powerful images
Simply beautiful
As always Sheldon
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Hi Sheldon
Thank your for the kind words and encouragement. I still don’t feel good about the heading. I suppose I’ll learn and I have with blogging in general. I changed the header to “The Wolf and I” still doesn’t gel to me.
I enjoy hearing from you.
:)
M
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Lovingly written… feelings of uncertainty and innocence registered with me.
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Hi Michelle
I’m thrilled you read the post. You kind words are always appreciated. I’m not happy with the header. Coming up with headers is my strength, this time it’s seem to gel. Your comment means a lot to me. You are more experienced yet positive with kindergarten work. I hope the word come again on any topic. I enjoy poetry.
Hugs
M
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